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Fly Fishing in the Netherlands
Did you know?
With an official license costing just €30 per year, you can fish in 90% of the Netherlands’ waters.
The Netherlands may not be the first destination that comes to mind for fly fishing, but the opportunities here are surprisingly diverse. You can target pike and carp in the scenic polder landscapes, bass in the major rivers, or even seabass in Rotterdam’s harbor.
Another major advantage? The fishing license is affordable, easy to obtain online, and grants access to vast stretches of water.
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