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Fly Fishing in Norway

Summarizing Norway’s fishing opportunities in a brief introduction is challenging, but we’ll try. From its abundant seas teeming with diverse, often large fish species to its rivers thriving with salmonids and underfished lakes dominated by wild trout, Norway is truly "a fly fisher’s paradise."

Norway offers highly accessible—and relatively affordable—Atlantic salmon and sea trout (sea-run brown trout) fishing during its short three-month season. Most rivers and streams connected to the sea sustain wild, self-reproducing populations and are open to anglers (national and waterway licenses required). In northern rivers, lucky fishers may even encounter the hard-fighting, stunning sea-run Arctic char alongside salmon and sea trout.

Fly Fishing in Norway


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