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Fly Fishing in France
Did you know?
In the Jura Mountains of eastern France, the River Doubs is renowned for its "Zebra Trout"—a strikingly beautiful brown trout subspecies with distinctive black-and-white stripes.
Boasting diverse landscapes, countless rivers, and a rich angling culture, France is a dream destination for fly fishers of all skill levels. From the pristine mountain streams of the Pyrenees and the Alps to the tranquil rivers of Normandy and Brittany, the country offers exceptional fishing opportunities, diverse species, and breathtaking scenery.
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