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Fly Fishing in Germany
Did you know?
The Bavarian town of Füssen, famous for its fairy-tale Neuschwanstein Castle, is also regarded as the "Cradle of Fly Fishing" in Germany, with fishing records dating back to the 15th century.
Thanks to its diverse landscapes, abundant rivers, and rich angling traditions, Germany is a prime destination for fly fishers of all skill levels. From Bavaria’s crystal-clear mountain streams to the lush northern lowlands, the country offers exceptional fishing opportunities, diverse species, and breathtaking scenery.
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